Improving The Message Of A Business Document

In this example, our customer was a senior web developer seeking to reduce his workload when reviewing potential new projects. The document he intended making use of to achieve greater efficiency had to be super-clear… It’s main task was to filter out unsuitable clients, usually people who were not willing to pay senior developer rates and/or accept a senior developer working remotely. There was a good chance this document’s message may have come across as rude! But, with Native Speaker Communications’ help, it was possible to make it firm, helpful AND friendly.

This image uses one page from the document we worked on as a before & after example.

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